Monday, November 30, 2015

My nice piece of writing

The mysterious soldier Attack !  

The loving school it was my day at school .Voices  sparing everywhere .THE Teacher silently whispering and talking but  suddenly THE SKY TURNED RED!!!!I shivered and quivered  in the bloodthirsty fear then bloodthirsty soldiers came breaking through the clear glass 
the peaceful classroom crumbles from head to toe. 

I like this story because the interesting  features are  like powerful words.