I was running around outside. Fell. Suddenly I
It was filled
into a crack and another world. Withzombies and more zombies.
Big green hands
came to me and tried to grab me! AAAAAA! 
I said.  I said to myself “I’ve got
to run!”  So I ran as fast as wind. But I
ran   to  a
zombie bear  so tiptoed by the zombie
bear I had the Goosebumps.     
Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteI like how you used adjectives and simlies to make your writing really interesting! Well done.
Miss Pethybridge