Monster under my bed

spider map

My reflection with Wisconsin

Writing

What I am enjoying  about this collaborative story is commenting on amother persons story writing with my buddy in Wisconsin, America. It is awesome to meet other person  on the other side of  the world. Next week we are going to use our planning to write the story on google docs.

Explanation Writing

How  milk gets from the cows to the  supermarket

A dairy cow begins her  life as a calf. The mum cow  feeds her Baby until the calf

is old enough to eat  grass.  Cows make milk when she has her first calf.  At the farm  the cows get milked. After they milk the milk truck comes in.

The milk truck sends the  milk to the milk factory. They test the milk. It gets processed and pasteurised. Then it goes into bottles and then goes into the cold room in boxes. It then goes to the supermarket.    

Please make a comment and it will make my writing better.

Dairy farm

Yesterday we went on a trip Miss Workman's  farm.

First we ate morning tea and then we went on a farm walk .!!!!!

We went the milk shed. We went  to the calf shed to have a look around the calf shed!

I like Workmam 's farm.   I do.

 

                                                                                                                                  

5 Sentence Challenge

I can see   pink blossoms  trees and I can a boy with a hose. The hose looks likes a water fountain.
I  can see horses running.
I can see red flowers and I can see green leaves on a tree.
I can see a dog having  a drink of water.

Writing

The old man saw gliding turtles and  one  turtle bumped the boat he dropped the box and he jump on a turtle the turtle caught up to the other turtles . The boat was still in the air. The turtles were busy flying with the old man.The turtles got to their home but the old man saw their home. There were fresh green grass and there were white flowers on the fresh green grass. The old man hopped of the turtles shell and he was running in the fresh green grass. He was happy and his heart was beating so excitedly he couldn't believe that he saw the turtles home. He slept with the turtles. The turtles were smooth and soft. In the morning the old man had breakfast his breakfast was fresh green grass because the grass was sweet and juicy.

This is my draft piece of writting. Please make a comment so my draft piece of writting can be better.

The flying frogs

I was sleeping on a lily pad. Suddenly  The lilypad was floating and  I was soaring through the air and
I was floating by a man who was eating and I said hi! and I was floating  into a lady's house.
I got the remote  I saw what program is on the TV.
And I got caught in a sheet.  I tied the sheet around my neck. It felt like I was a super man.
And then I said hi to some people then they said hi back to me.
I was bored in the pond.

Waitomo caves poster

I  made a  poster because we wanted to protect our waitomo caves.
I am good at drawing. Next time I will draw a clearer picture.

All about me

Hi my name Jade. I am 7 years old.
My favourite colour pink .
My favourite animals are cats.
My favourite thing to do at school is maths.