Hi my name is Jade. I am 7 years old. I have one brother and one step brother.
My favourite fruit are apples. My favourite food is chips. My favourite Colour is green. My favourite subject is maths because I can learn more and go up to a higher level like my x tables and divide bys. My favourite animal is cats my favourite sport is soccer. I want to achieve being a year 4 leader by teaching the year 3’s by helping them with their maths and writing, reading and the computer work. My goal is to write a little faster so I can get on task to make me write faster. I need to have all my belongings in my pencil case and a proper pencil so it can’t break.
A dairy cow begins her life as a calf. The mum cow feeds her Baby until the calf
is old enough to eat grass. Cows make milk when she has her first calf. At the farm the cows get milked. After they milk the milk truck comes in.
The milk truck sends the milk to the milk factory. They test the milk. It gets processed and pasteurised. Then it goes into bottles and then goes into the cold room in boxes. It then goes to the supermarket.
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I can see pink blossoms trees and I can a boy with a hose. The hose looks likes a water fountain.
I can see horses running.
I can see red flowers and I can see green leaves on a tree.
I can see a dog having a drink of water.
The old man saw gliding turtles and one turtle bumped the boat he dropped the box and he jump on a turtle the turtle caught up to the other turtles . The boat was still in the air. The turtles were busy flying with the old man.The turtles got to their home but the old man saw their home. There were fresh green grass and there were white flowers on the fresh green grass. The old man hopped of the turtles shell and he was running in the fresh green grass. He was happy and his heart was beating so excitedly he couldn't believe that he saw the turtles home. He slept with the turtles. The turtles were smooth and soft. In the morning the old man had breakfast his breakfast was fresh green grass because the grass was sweet and juicy. This is my draft piece of writting. Please make a comment so my draft piece of writting can be better.
I was sleeping on a lily pad. Suddenly The lilypad was floating and I was soaring through the air and
I was floating by a man who was eating and I said hi! and I was floating into a lady's house.
I got the remote I saw what program is on the TV.
And I got caught in a sheet. I tied the sheet around my neck. It felt like I was a super man.
And then I said hi to some people then they said hi back to me.
I was bored in the pond.