I was sleeping on a lily pad. Suddenly The lilypad was floating and I was soaring through the air and
I was floating by a man who was eating and I said hi! and I was floating into a lady's house.
I got the remote I saw what program is on the TV.
And I got caught in a sheet. I tied the sheet around my neck. It felt like I was a super man.
And then I said hi to some people then they said hi back to me.
I was bored in the pond.
I was floating by a man who was eating and I said hi! and I was floating into a lady's house.
I got the remote I saw what program is on the TV.
And I got caught in a sheet. I tied the sheet around my neck. It felt like I was a super man.
And then I said hi to some people then they said hi back to me.
I was bored in the pond.
Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteI liked the part in your writing where you wrote that you felt like superman. I could make a picture in my mind.
Can you add some adjectives (describing words) to make your story come alive?
What colour was the sheet?
what was your lily pad like?
Mrs Natusch
Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteAsk Toby to teach you how to get a voki on your blog.
Mrs N