I can see pink blossoms trees and I can a boy with a hose. The hose looks likes a water fountain.
I can see horses running.
I can see red flowers and I can see green leaves on a tree.
I can see a dog having a drink of water.
These are great sentences Jade. You have obviously looked carefully at the picture and made some good choices. My favourite is the one about the water fountain. Well done!
Hi Jade Well done on entering the 5SC for the first time. I like the way you have used fullstops and capital letters for each of your 5 sentences. You have written about the picture and have noticed some interesting things. Next time you could add even more adjectives - really describe what the pink trees look like. Great job! I can't wait to read your next 5SC! Mrs Natusch
You have looked very carefully at the picture to make your sentences. Well done! It is a very busy picture with lots of things happening in it. Maybe for next time, try to think of a different beginning for some of your sentences so they are all a little different. I liked the sentence about the hose. I wasn't too sure if it was a hose or a water fountain either. I hope my children put as much effort into their 5 sentence challenge as you have. Keep writing!
I can see pink blossoms trees and I can a boy with a hose. The hose looks likes a water fountain.
Hello, I think the hose looks like a water fountain too! You have noticed lots of things in the picture!
ReplyDeleteThese are great sentences Jade. You have obviously looked carefully at the picture and made some good choices. My favourite is the one about the water fountain. Well done!
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Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteWell done on entering the 5SC for the first time. I like the way you have used fullstops and capital letters for each of your 5 sentences. You have written about the picture and have noticed some interesting things.
Next time you could add even more adjectives - really describe what the pink trees look like.
Great job! I can't wait to read your next 5SC!
Mrs Natusch
You have looked very carefully at the picture to make your sentences. Well done! It is a very busy picture with lots of things happening in it. Maybe for next time, try to think of a different beginning for some of your sentences so they are all a little different. I liked the sentence about the hose. I wasn't too sure if it was a hose or a water fountain either. I hope my children put as much effort into their 5 sentence challenge as you have. Keep writing!
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