One sunny day I got some ice cream with ZOE. She got some ice cream as well. We stopped and we saw 2 BIG FOOT PRINTS! We said ‘’ LETS GO AND we went home. At home we watched TV WE watched the news. On the news a man said’’ BIG FOOT IS SMASHING THE BLELDINGS!!!’’. me and ZOE said oho. The end
Hi Jade, A good effort. You seem to have used capital letters where they were not required, perhaps it would be good to check your work before submitting it next time. Well done.
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