Thursday, February 20, 2014

monster !

One bright night .  I was  camping  with Zoe and poppy we are moving our tint  Suddenly  we fell into a cave. we should sleep where to night we said  . it was still  night time  it shouldn't  be still night  time we said .
then a big  light we followed to the light but suddenlysaw I big red monster  with  a    sring  with the light 
oh no thats not good we said stop the monster  he  HE SAID  I M GOING UP ! he said. 
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2014 at 8:56 AM

    Awesome story Jade! I like the descriptive words used.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2014 at 9:02 AM

    I picked your blog because I have a friend named Jade! She is beautiful like you!

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  3. MikaelaFebruary 26, 2014 at 2:50 AM

    I like your story!!!

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 8:34 AM

    Cool post Jade, I liked how you used descriptive words.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 9:00 AM

    Hi Jade! I love your story!! It makes it more interesting when you capitalize, I might have to try that! I also have one more thing to tell you, my friends name is Jade! Isn't that bizarre!!

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