I was at home running around and then I saw a hole with a bright light. I jumped into the dark hole. I felt something climbing up my back. It was a big spider it showed
me it's home. I said “this is cool’’. The
spider kept showing me everything.
I fell fast asleep and then I woke up. I said
“I’m in the spiders web!” yI elled and yelled for my mum but there was no
reply. I had a knife and I accidentally
stabbed the spider and I said’’ sorry little spider!’’.
Then I got
home, I was happy that I was
home.
Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteI like the start of your story. You describe what you doing before the problem happens.
Great use of speech marks as well.
I am wondering how you got home again? Weren't you dowe a hole?
From Mrs Natusch