Friday, September 20, 2013

100WC

 I was at home running around and  then I saw a   hole with a bright light. I   jumped into the dark hole. I felt something climbing up my back. It was a big spider it showed me it's home. I said “this is cool’’.  The spider kept showing me everything.
I   fell fast asleep and then I woke up. I said “I’m in the spiders web!” yI elled and yelled for my mum but there was no reply.  I had a knife and  I  accidentally  stabbed the spider and I said’’ sorry little spider!’’.

  Then I got  home, I was happy that  I was home.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jade
    I like the start of your story. You describe what you doing before the problem happens.
    Great use of speech marks as well.
    I am wondering how you got home again? Weren't you dowe a hole?
    From Mrs Natusch

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