Thursday, September 5, 2013

my story

 I was running around outside. Fell. Suddenly I
It was filled into a crack and another world. Withzombies and more zombies.

Big green hands came to me and tried to grab me! AAAAAA!  I said.  I said to myself “I’ve got to run!”  So I ran as fast as wind. But I ran   to  a zombie bear  so tiptoed by the zombie bear I had the Goosebumps.     

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jade

    I like how you used adjectives and simlies to make your writing really interesting! Well done.

    Miss Pethybridge

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